Cindy: Friday Fictioneers 100 word story challenge

As Cindy looked out of the castle she knew what she needed to do.

She would go and return her heart to the only boy that was ever true.

Although Billy hadn’t a dollar to his name.

She jumped on one of the maids bicycles and rode off in the rain.

When she got to Billy’s he was so happy that she no longer felt afraid.

Billy the poor beggar boy would be the next king after that day.

The Royal Family would have to accept him now, there was no other way.

They ran off and eloped that very day.

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16 thoughts on “Cindy: Friday Fictioneers 100 word story challenge

  1. I enjoyed your story, and the hope for these kids. I’m not good at poetry, but if I could offer a tiny concrit, it would be to look at avoiding the repetition of “day” in the last three lines. Just a thought.
    While I’m here, let me stop to applaud the subtitle of your blog – if you find away to achieve the Good wife / mother / self balance, do please send me some tips!

  2. Dear Sarah,

    Sweet story. Always good to return to your first love.

    BTW It’s okay and preferred that you paste the photo prompt into your blog for the story. I think I’ve confused some with the copyright messages. The copyright applies to any use other than Friday Fictioneers. If this is not the issue, disregard.

    At any rate, I enjoyed your story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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